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Liz's avatar

Celeste, that was so fun to read! I love both of the main characters already! Please keep it going! I wanna relive my super orthodox college days through these great characters! I can hardly fathom how different things would be now had I learned not to care what others thought of me all these years. Keep up the good work!

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Oh my gosh your support means the world Liz thank you!!! And right?? College was fun but would have been WAY more fun if I could have dropped all the guilt

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Ames's avatar

Loved it! Brings back a lot of nostalgia and makes me wonder if my husband's BYU roommates ever warned him about me: me being the UVU girl who dressed immodest and had multiple peircings, and who kept him away from his apartment for all hours of the day and night... but hey he got me to the temple and on the straight and narrow for a few years. They'd probably say that it checks out that I've left now. Anyway, excited to read next week's excerpt! We'll done.

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Ha! You might relate to the story more than most!

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Madi K's avatar

I love this! It is hard to put into words how cathartic this is to read. I am glad it is coming in parts because it will give me time to process all my flashbacks haha!

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Cathartic! Yay!!! Thank you Madi!!

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Regan Pence's avatar

Celeste I love this! You’ve taken me right back to the BYU days. Can’t wait for the next installment

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Regan Thank You!!!

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Dustin C's avatar

Ummm… that was nostalgic as hell. It’s hard to remember my worldviews from 12 years ago but this triggered so many things in a good way. Great writing as always!

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Oh my gosh Dustin thank you so much 🙈

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Clarissa's avatar

This is so so good, I was sucked in at every moment. Deeply cathartic even after making peace with and moving far beyond my Mormon past. Oh the BYU days! I love your main characters so much

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Thank you so much Clarissa!!! That’s so nice of you to say!!! 🙈

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Mary Hutto Fruchter's avatar

I love the banter between them, cleverly written dialogue. Pretty cool to see you give fiction a go.

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Thank you Mary!! It’s been surprisingly scary - I could barely look at my phone all day.

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Samantha Bateman's avatar

Utterly engrossed! I can’t wait to read more! Incredible job, Celeste! 😊

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Thank you Samantha! That is so nice of you to say!

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Rachel Allred's avatar

This is great. Can't wait for the next part. I love that she is from Bethesda! I'm also a MD girl who went to the Y. Also, the Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants is set in Bethesda.

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Celeste Davis's avatar

Ok we almost moved to Bethesda once and ever since I’ve always thought it’s just the best city name. Fun to say.

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Celeste Davis's avatar

hahahaha! and now that is how I will always say it

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Rachel Allred's avatar

There is an episode of the TV show Bones, where they are pretending to move something to a government hospital in Bethesda and Bones is overactive and pronounces every syllable of Bethesda, very awkwardly. I always pronounce it that way now. 😋

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Tamara Jacobs's avatar

Ah!!! I’m loving it sooooo much!!!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!!❤️❤️❤️

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Nile's avatar

Celeste, I LOVED this. When she talked about her mission, I cried. That was exactly how I’ve felt. And the end when Steven was talking about her and how she might not be one Parker could take to the temple cuz of a, b, c, it was just so easy to connect with.

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